Re: complaint

17 Jan

Thankyou, dear Sir, for your recent feedback.
It was good of you to expose our lack
Of sufficient service to you, dear Sir;
when, from your money, we have gained our hire.

Some criticism has a place, for sure
And we do indeed accept our frailties.
However, in this case, we were quite right,
and so resented being condemned with might.

It is with the deepest regret, my friend,
that I will inform you in the end
of how I cannot consent in your aim
despite your insistance that you will gain.

“What!?” You may say in indignation.
Yes. Truly, such detraction bewrays you.

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Posted by on Tuesday, January 17, 2012 in poetry


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